Nicely done Jesse. I was able to learn a lot about your brother and how the Marine Corps has changed him. The angel and devil pictures at the beginning were a bit odd though.
Nice job Jesse. It helped teach about how your brother was on a path to disaster, then turned his life around and made it better. The pictures and music related very welly to it.
Your music really emphasizes your message. I like the way you let the singer sing at the beginning and end but didn't try to talk over him in the middle. It made it much easier to focus on your story. Nice job!
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Nicely done Jesse. I was able to learn a lot about your brother and how the Marine Corps has changed him. The angel and devil pictures at the beginning were a bit odd though.
Nice job Jesse. It helped teach about how your brother was on a path to disaster, then turned his life around and made it better. The pictures and music related very welly to it.
That's really good man. It's something that's really important to you and comes from you're heart so it makes for a powerful presentation. Good job.
Your music really emphasizes your message. I like the way you let the singer sing at the beginning and end but didn't try to talk over him in the middle. It made it much easier to focus on your story. Nice job!
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